One of the things I have had to do for Susan's class was open up my mind and start thinking in the lines of script. I had no idea there were so many things involved in the actual process of writing. Whether it was log lines, treatments or character descriptions, each of these steps I found were vital in creating an organized thought process which would soon be used in my final peice. Below I have written out my treatment for you to all enjoy. Hope you all like it!
I'M WATCHING YOU
BY MEGAN LOCKHURST
The watcher has become the watch.
With her short brown fringe hung across her eyes, Sophie O’Connell swivels on a chair mocking the people she watches on the CCTV monitors that line the wall of her office.
Chatting to her best friend on the phone, Sophie starts to get the feeling that someone is watching her. As she turns an electrician is standing behind her ready to fix a monitor that had been playing up, feeling silly Sophie grabs her tweed coat and heads down the street to get some lunch, leaving the electrician alone to do his job.
As Sophie heads to a near by deli she is stopped by a local tramp that insists she buys a copy of ‘The Big Issue’, as she goes to say no the tramp starts to ramble about Sophie’s fate and how a man is following her. Sophie pushes a pound in the tramps hand and hurries on her way.
Finally getting to the deli she notices an old man watching her beyond his paper. A little freaked out about his presence Sophie grabs her sandwich and quickly gets on her way. She is bothered once again as she notices the same man sitting in the park reading the same newspaper as a old woman soon approaches her asking her for her sandwich.
Eager to get back to the office, Sophie leaves rushing by the tramp, however looking down as she has no interest in what he has to say this time. When she arrives at the office the electrician is gone and Sophie is left on her own with the dim humming noise the CCTV monitors are making.
Feeling quite spooked Sophie takes a deep breath and takes out her phone. About to call her best friend Su, an incoming call to the office interrupts her using her mobile phone and she answers. The voice on the other side sounds robotic and deep sending chills down Sophie’s spine. Nothing seems right about this call. As Sophie continues to ask who it is, the voice says hello and hangs up. Freaked out she presses send on her mobile to speak to Su, who inevitably isn’t answering.
Trying to figure out who the mysterious caller was Sophie turns her chair towards the office door again feeling like someone is watching her. As she looks up towards the ceiling a strange old CCTV camera is set staring into her room. Standing up Sophie walks towards the camera which seems to be following her every move. Pausing for a moment Sophie walks back into her office, shuts the door and calls her boss to ask about the camera. Telling Sophie the camera hasn’t worked for years Sophie convinces herself its all in her head and finishes the day off with nothing more happening.
As Sophie clocks out, she rushes by the camera and heads downstairs to the basement where her car is parked. As most employees have already left, the car park is empty and hollow. Walking briskly to her car, Sophie hears footsteps following her. She begins to walk faster and notices the echoes of the other footsteps set the same pace. Finally Sophie breaks out into a jog but she trips landing on her wrist.
Flat on her face and hearing someone getting closer Sophie starts to scream for help. As she turns to glance her stalker she realizes with great relief that it is her friend Su leaving her to feel extremely embarrassed. She explains to Su that she thought she was being stalked and has had a hectic day. Both girls get into Sophie’s car and Sophie starts to drive Su home.
On the way back Sophie tells Su in detail everything that has happened to her. She drops Su off and tells her she will meet her for lunch tomorrow.
As She leaves Sue’s house Sophie sees the same man from the deli and the park standing at a bus stop with the same news paper he had been reading earlier on. Feeling uneasy about him Sophie speeds up no realizing a new speed camera had just been put up at the end off Sue’s street. Racing away Sophie gets flashed by the camera but continues onwards finally arriving home in less then 10 minutes.
Pulling up to her drive, Sophie gets out of the car and runs up the walkway to her front door. Searching for her door key at the bottom of her bag, she realizes she is standing on 3 cigarette buds. As she isn’t a smoker Sophie grabs the key from the bag and rushes inside. Finally feeling safe, Sophie turns on the lights and goes to the kitchen to get a cup of tea. As the kettle starts to boil Sophie hears something fall through the mail slot in her front door. Peering at the door Sophie grabs the letter, gets her cup of tea and sits down in the living room. As she turns on the starts to open the letter the tv finally tunes in and she notices that she is looking at herself. Looking down at the open letter it reads ‘I’m Watching you’.